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I knew a boy of age fifteen
The nicest guy I've ever seen
A caring friend, my closest bud
I loved him so, like flesh and blood
We were connected through heart and soul
Without the other, we weren't whole
When we were together, my world was bright
Now that he's gone, I've lost the light

It's more than just another death
Everything crumbled when he left
He stole my laugh, my smile, my joy
He isn't just another boy
To his grave he brought a part
Of me that resided in his heart
My dearest friend, why have you robbed me?
Instead of my smile, wouldn't you prefer money?
A piece of gold, five silver rings
Why do you insist on breaking my wings?

With you I used to rule the sky
With you my wings would take me high
Now that you're gone, these wings are vestigial
Now that you're gone, this pain is perennial
Come back to me, my only friend
You promised together we'd see the end
As well as a thief, are you a liar, too?
For all these years I believed you

You've killed a part of me, homicide
Which was really you, suicide
You stole everything you could get
You lied like it was no sweat
Dearly beloved, you are the perfect criminal
For that I must say you are truly formidable
In life and death you are a fugitive
But that doesn't matter, I can forgive
After all, I love you, maybe more than a friend
So I will be happy, or at least I'll pretend

My heart will always ache for you
Deep down, I'll always wait for you
But for now, my memory, so sweet and deceased
Sleep in the earth, please rest in peace
:iconmxfragility:
I apologize for my absence. As compensation, I attempted to write a good poem. I think I just blurted out all these mixed feelings about previous freindships and possible crushes. Whether it's good or not is for you to decide, of course.

Apparently I've been accused of art theft, so I'm taking down the picture...

Poem © :iconmxfragility: MXF

*ATTENTION: You are NOT authorized to use my work.

Ciao for now.
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:iconbrunomarsaddict:
That is so I dpn't know, mixed feelings with this one. Ahw! That is going to my favourites. Brilliantly written.
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~MXFragility Nov 30, 2012   General Artist
ha thank you
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~bebepaws Oct 24, 2012  Student Photographer
wow. that was DEEP.
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~butterskotchpictures Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very well done.
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:iconfireandiice:
Wow.
Well done, felt some tears coming on... *being strong* ;)

Great work!
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~MXFragility Jun 21, 2012   General Artist
thank you
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:iconbabybottledlion:
Amazing. I loved it. (:
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~MXFragility Jun 20, 2012   General Artist
:aww:
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!MonicaArlene May 30, 2012  Student Writer
Very nice! I think it's stretched a bit to rhyme, but overall it was a great poem!
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:iconamateurexpert92:
This is beautiful. It actually made me really sad, but that's what makes it so great. :)
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